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|{{Commentary|''Paliure'': a play on Hagen’s name. ''Hagedorn'' is German for “hawthorn.” Cf. line 1421.<br />''Ut pungere possis'': i.e., and that is all. | |{{Commentary|''Paliure'': a play on Hagen’s name. ''Hagedorn'' is German for “hawthorn.” Cf. line 1421.<br />''Ut pungere possis'': i.e., and that is all. | ||
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|{{Commentary|''Astu'': not, as Wieland oddly has it, “foolishness,” but rather “cunning” – Waltharius claims that there is a method to Hagen’s “play.” | |{{Commentary|''Astu'': not, as Wieland oddly has it, “foolishness,” but rather “cunning” – Waltharius claims that there is a method to Hagen’s “play.” | ||
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Revision as of 19:51, 26 August 2009
Interea herois coepit subrepere menti | Liber Deuteronomii 15.9: cave ne forte subripiat tibi impia cogitatio. ‘Beware lest perhaps a wicked thought steal in upon thee.’
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DSSSDS Elision: interea herois |
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Quiddam, qui tacito premit has sub corde loquelas: | Aeineid 4.332: curam sub corde premebat. ‘He smothered the pain deep within his heart.’ Statius, Thebaid 9.824: pressum tacito sub corde dolorem. . . ‘The grief that lay hidden in his silent breast. . .’
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Si Fortuna viam non commutaverit, isti | SDSSDS | |||||
Vana fatigatum memet per ludicra fallent.' | DSSSDS | |||||
Ilico et elata Haganoni voce profatur: | 1350 | DSDSDS Elision: ilico et Hiatus: elata Haganoni |
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O paliure, vires foliis, ut pungere possis; | Paliure: a play on Hagen’s name. Hagedorn is German for “hawthorn.” Cf. line 1421. Ut pungere possis: i.e., and that is all.
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Aeineid 6.373: O Palinurus.
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Tu saltando iocans astu me ludere temptas. | Astu: not, as Wieland oddly has it, “foolishness,” but rather “cunning” – Waltharius claims that there is a method to Hagen’s “play.”
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Sed iam faxo locum, propius ne accedere tardes: | SDDSDS Elision: ne accedere |
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Ecce tuas -- scio, praegrandes -- ostendito vires! | Scio equiv. to quas novi
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Me piget incassum tantos sufferre labores.' | 1355 | Aeineid 7.421: Turne, tot incassum fusos patiere labores? ‘Turnus, will you endure all these labours spend in vain?’
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Dixit et exiliens contum contorsit in ipsum, | Ipsum: Hagen
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Aeneid 12.266: dixit, et adversos telum contorsit in hostis. ‘He spoke, and hurled his spear full against the foe.’
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Qui pergens onerat clipeum dirimitque aliquantum | Aeneid 10.476-477.: illa volans umeri surgunt qua tegmina summa/ incidit, atque viam clipei molita per oras/ tandem etiam magno strinxit de corpore Turni. ‘On flies the shaft and strikes where the top of the mail rises to guard the shoulder; then, forcing a way through the shield’s rim, at last even grazed the mighty frame of Turnus.’
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Loricae ac magno modicum de corpore stringit; | SSDSDS Elision: loricae ac |
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Denique praecipuis praecinctus fulserat armis. | Fulserat: perhaps a true pluperfect (pace Beck), describing Hagen before the blow, in order to explain how it does him so little damage.
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Prudentius, Psychomachia 454: gremio praecincta capaci. . . ‘Her robe arranged to make a capacious fold in front. . .’ Aeneid 11.769: insignis longe Phrygiis fulgebat in armis. ‘He glittered resplendent from farr off in his Phrygian armour.’
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At vir Waltharius missa cum cuspide currens | 1360 | SDSSDS | ||||
Evaginato regem importunior ense | Aeneid 10.474-475.: emittit viribus hastam/ vaginaque cava fulgentem deripit ensem. ‘She hurls his spear with all his strength and plucks his flashing sword from its hollow scabbard.’ Liber Regum I 31.4: evagina gladium tuum. ‘Draw thy sword.’
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Petit et scuto dextra de parte revulso | DSSSDS | |||||
Ictum praevalidum ac mirandum fecit eique | SDSSDS Elision: praevalidum ac |
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Crus cum poplite adusque femur decerpserat omne. | SDDSDS Elision: poplite adusque |
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Ille super parmam ante pedes mox concidit huius. | 1365 | Pedes…huis: i.e., of Waltharius
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Palluit exanguis domino recidente satelles. | Satelles: Hagen
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Alpharides spatam tollens iterato cruentam | Spatam equiv. to ensem Iterato equiv. to iterum
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Ardebat lapso postremum infligere vulnus. | SSSSDS Elision: postremum infligere |
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Immemor at proprii Hagano vir forte doloris | DDDSDS Hiatus: proprii Hagano |
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Aeratum caput inclinans obiecit ad ictum. | 1370 | Aeratum: i.e., wearing a helmet
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Extensam cohibere manum non quiverat heros, | Prudentius, Psychomachia 137-138.: vertitur ad capulum manus inproba et ense corusco/ conisa in plagam dextra sublimis ab aure/ erigitur mediumque ferit librata cerebrum./ aerea sed cocto cassis formata metallo/ tinnitum percussa refert aciemque retundit/ dura resultantem, frangit quoque vena rebellis/ inlisum chalybem, dum cedere nescia cassos/ excipit adsultus ferienti et tuta resistit./ 'Ira, ubi truncati mucronis fragmina vidit/ et procul in partes ensem crepuisse minutas,/ iam capulum retinente manu sine pondere ferri,/ mentis inops ebur infelix decorisque pudendi/ perfida signa abicit monumentaque tristia longe/ spernit, et ad proprium succenditur effera letum. ‘She turns her ruthless hand to her sword-hilt, and, putting all its strength into a blow with the flashing blade, it rises high above her right ear and then, launching its stroke, smites her foe’s head in the very middle. But the helmet of forged bronze only resounds under the blow; the blade rebounds with blunted edge, so hard it is; the unyielding metal breaks the steel that smites it, unflinchingly receives the vain attack, and stands up to the striker without hurt. Seeing her blade shivered in pieces and how the sword has scattered away in rattling fragments while her hand still grasps the hilt after it has lost its weight of steel, Wrath is beside herself and casts away the luckless ivory that has been false to her, the token of honour turned to shame. Afar she flings that unwelcome reminder, and wild passion fires her to slay herself.’ Aeneid 12.740-741.: mucro glacies ceu futtilis ictu/ dissiluit, fulva resplendent fragmina harena. ‘The blade, like brittle ice, flew asunder at the stroke; the fragments glitter on the yellow sand.’
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Sed cassis fabrefacta diu meliusque peracta | Fabrefacta equiv. to a fabro facta
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Prudentius, Psychomachia 137-138.: vertitur ad capulum manus inproba et ense corusco/ conisa in plagam dextra sublimis ab aure/ erigitur mediumque ferit librata cerebrum./ aerea sed cocto cassis formata metallo/ tinnitum percussa refert aciemque retundit/ dura resultantem, frangit quoque vena rebellis/ inlisum chalybem, dum cedere nescia cassos/ excipit adsultus ferienti et tuta resistit./ 'Ira, ubi truncati mucronis fragmina vidit/ et procul in partes ensem crepuisse minutas,/ iam capulum retinente manu sine pondere ferri,/ mentis inops ebur infelix decorisque pudendi/ perfida signa abicit monumentaque tristia longe/ spernit, et ad proprium succenditur effera letum. ‘She turns her ruthless hand to her sword-hilt, and, putting all its strength into a blow with the flashing blade, it rises high above her right ear and then, launching its stroke, smites her foe’s head in the very middle. But the helmet of forged bronze only resounds under the blow; the blade rebounds with blunted edge, so hard it is; the unyielding metal breaks the steel that smites it, unflinchingly receives the vain attack, and stands up to the striker without hurt. Seeing her blade shivered in pieces and how the sword has scattered away in rattling fragments while her hand still grasps the hilt after it has lost its weight of steel, Wrath is beside herself and casts away the luckless ivory that has been false to her, the token of honour turned to shame. Afar she flings that unwelcome reminder, and wild passion fires her to slay herself.’ Aeneid 12.740-741.: mucro glacies ceu futtilis ictu/ dissiluit, fulva resplendent fragmina harena. ‘The blade, like brittle ice, flew asunder at the stroke; the fragments glitter on the yellow sand.’
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Excipit assultum mox et scintillat in altum. | DSSSDS | |||||
Cuius duritia stupefactus dissilit ensis, | Stupefactus…ensis: personification
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Proh dolor! et crepitans partim micat aere et herbis. | 1375 | Partim micat aere et herbis: i.e., the sword shatters; the pieces fly in different directions.
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