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||{{Comment|A somewhat problematic line to translate. Kratz writes that Hildegund "matched him stride for stride." This is a good but loose rendering. Literally, the line reads "the girl bruises heel with heel." This translation suggests Hildegund's loyalty and closeness to Walther. Another possibility: "the girl wipes out footprint with footprint." The phrasing imitates Virgil's Aeneid (V.324). R. Deryk Williams (Aeneid I-VI, 2006) acknowledges the difficulty of the phrase there too, suggesting that it based on Homer's formulation in the Iliad (23.763, in which Odysseus "is treading in Ajax's footsteps before the dust had settled" (420). MCD}}
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||{{Comment|A somewhat problematic line to translate. Kratz writes that Hildegund "matched him stride for stride." This is a good but loose rendering. Literally, the line reads "the girl bruises heel with heel." This translation suggests Hildegund's loyalty and closeness to Walther. Another possibility: "the girl wipes out footprint with footprint." MCD [It would be a good idea to look at a commentary on Aeneid 5 to see how line 324 is construed. JZ]}}
 
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|[[Ipsaque]] [[robustum]] [[rexit]] [[per]] [[lora]] [[caballum]]
 
|[[Ipsaque]] [[robustum]] [[rexit]] [[per]] [[lora]] [[caballum]]

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