Difference between revisions of "Waltharius123"

From Waltharius
Jump to: navigation, search
 
(7 intermediate revisions by the same user not shown)
Line 8: Line 8:
 
|{{Commentary|''Ospirin'': The Roman historian Jordanes (''Getica'' 49) speaks of Attila’s ''innumerabiles uxores'', but this name in particular is not found elsewhere.
 
|{{Commentary|''Ospirin'': The Roman historian Jordanes (''Getica'' 49) speaks of Attila’s ''innumerabiles uxores'', but this name in particular is not found elsewhere.
 
}}
 
}}
|{{Parallel|''Aeneid'' 2.783: ''illic res laetae regnumque et regia coniunx.'' “There in store for you are happy days, kingship, and a royal wife.”<br /><br />Jordanes ''Getica'' 49: ''Qui, ut Priscus istoricus refert, exitus sui tempore puellam Ildico nomine decoram valde sibi in matrimonio post innumerabiles uxores, ut mos erat gentis illius, socians.''<br />Shortly before he died, as the historian Priscus relates, he took in marriage a very beautiful girl named Ildico, after countless other wives, as was the custom of his race.
+
|{{Parallel|''Aeneid'' 2.783: ''illic res laetae regnumque et regia coniunx.'' “There in store for you are happy days, kingship, and a royal wife.”<br />Jordanes, ''Getica'' 49: ''Qui, ut Priscus istoricus refert, exitus sui tempore puellam Ildico nomine decoram valde sibi in matrimonio post innumerabiles uxores, ut mos erat gentis illius, socians.'' Shortly before he died, as the historian Priscus relates, he took in marriage a very beautiful girl named Ildico, after countless other wives, as was the custom of his race.
 
}}
 
}}
 
|-
 
|-
Line 15: Line 15:
 
|{{Commentary|Two examples of slight semantic drift away from Classical Latin:<br />''Attendens'': “noticing” (rather than “directing attention towards”)<br />''Suggessit'': “offered, advised” (rather than “supplied, provided”)
 
|{{Commentary|Two examples of slight semantic drift away from Classical Latin:<br />''Attendens'': “noticing” (rather than “directing attention towards”)<br />''Suggessit'': “offered, advised” (rather than “supplied, provided”)
 
}}
 
}}
|{{Parallel|''Aeneid'' 5.852: ''talia dicta dabat.'' ‘Such words he said.<br /><br />''Aeneid'' 2.6: ''talia fando.'' ‘In telling such a tale…’
+
|{{Parallel|''Aeneid'' 5.852: ''talia dicta dabat.'' “Such words he said.<br />2.6: ''talia fando.'' “In telling such a tale…”
 +
 
 +
 
 
}}
 
}}
 
|-
 
|-
Line 26: Line 28:
 
|nowrap | [[Ne]] [[vestri]] [[imperii]] [[labatur]] [[forte]] [[columna]],
 
|nowrap | [[Ne]] [[vestri]] [[imperii]] [[labatur]] [[forte]] [[columna]],
 
|
 
|
|{{Commentary|''Vestri'': the 2nd person plural to indicate respect in addressing a single person (cf. French ''vous'', German ''Sie''), as Ospirin uses here speaking to Attila, Walther also to Attila (lines 146, 306), and Hildegund to Walther (257), is not found in classical authors, though it appears in later romance languages.<br />''Imperii…columna'': Walther is described this way again in line 376.
+
|{{Commentary|''Vestri'': the 2nd person plural to indicate respect in addressing a single person (cf. French ''vous'', German ''Sie''), as Ospirin uses here speaking to Attila, Walther also to Attila (lines 146, 306), and Hildegund to Walther (257), is not found in classical authors, though it appears in later romance languages.<br />''Imperii … columna'': Walther is described this way again in line 376.
 
}}
 
}}
 
|-
 
|-
Line 58: Line 60:
 
|
 
|
 
|
 
|
|{{Parallel|''Aeneid'' 7.421: ''Turne, tot incassum fusos patiere labores?'' “Turnus, will you endure all these labours spent in vain?”<br /><br />''Aeneid'' 12.32–33: ''me casus, quae, Turne, sequantur / bella, vides, quantos primus patiare labores.'' “You see what perils, Turnus, what wars pursue me, what heavy burdens you bear above all.”
+
|{{Parallel|''Aeneid'' 7.421: ''Turne, tot incassum fusos patiere labores?'' “Turnus, will you endure all these labours spent in vain?”<br />12.32–33: ''me casus, quae, Turne, sequantur / bella, vides, quantos primus patiare labores.'' “You see what perils, Turnus, what wars pursue me, what heavy burdens you bear above all.”
 
}}
 
}}
 
|-
 
|-
Line 96: Line 98:
 
|nowrap | [[Quod]] [[si]] [[completis]], [[illum]] [[stabilire]] [[potestis]].'
 
|nowrap | [[Quod]] [[si]] [[completis]], [[illum]] [[stabilire]] [[potestis]].'
 
|140
 
|140
|{{Commentary|''Stabilire'': the verb is used with human direct objects in the Vulgate Bible in the sense of “to sustain,” but here it probably has its more literal meaning, continuing the metaphor of the ''columna'' from line 126, as Wieland suggests.
+
|{{Commentary|''Stabilire'': the verb is used with human direct objects in the Vulgate in the sense of “to sustain,” but here it probably has its more literal meaning, continuing the metaphor of the ''columna'' from line 126, as Wieland suggests.
 
}}
 
}}
 
|{{Parallel|Ezek. 4.6 Vulg.: ''et cum conpleveris haec…'' “And when thou hast accomplished this…”
 
|{{Parallel|Ezek. 4.6 Vulg.: ''et cum conpleveris haec…'' “And when thou hast accomplished this…”

Latest revision as of 18:41, 28 July 2026

Attila’s queen Ospirin advises her husband to ensure Walther’s loyalty by arranging a marriage (123–141)

Ospirin elapsum Haganonem regia coniunx  Ospirin: The Roman historian Jordanes (Getica 49) speaks of Attila’s innumerabiles uxores, but this name in particular is not found elsewhere.

 

 Aeneid 2.783: illic res laetae regnumque et regia coniunx. “There in store for you are happy days, kingship, and a royal wife.”
Jordanes, Getica 49: Qui, ut Priscus istoricus refert, exitus sui tempore puellam Ildico nomine decoram valde sibi in matrimonio post innumerabiles uxores, ut mos erat gentis illius, socians. Shortly before he died, as the historian Priscus relates, he took in marriage a very beautiful girl named Ildico, after countless other wives, as was the custom of his race.

 

Attendens domino suggessit talia dicta:  Two examples of slight semantic drift away from Classical Latin:
Attendens: “noticing” (rather than “directing attention towards”)
Suggessit: “offered, advised” (rather than “supplied, provided”)

 

 Aeneid 5.852: talia dicta dabat. “Such words he said.”
2.6: talia fando. “In telling such a tale…”


 

Provideat caveatque, precor, sollertia regis, 125  Luke 12.15 Vulg.: videte et cavete. “Take heed and beware.”

 

Ne vestri imperii labatur forte columna,  Vestri: the 2nd person plural to indicate respect in addressing a single person (cf. French vous, German Sie), as Ospirin uses here speaking to Attila, Walther also to Attila (lines 146, 306), and Hildegund to Walther (257), is not found in classical authors, though it appears in later romance languages.
Imperii … columna: Walther is described this way again in line 376.

 

Hoc est, Waltharius vester discedat amicus,  Discedat: still governed by ne.

 

In quo magna potestatis vis extitit huius;  Potestatis = regni

 

Nam vereor, ne fors fugiens Haganonem imitetur,
Idcircoque meam perpendite nunc rationem: 130
Cum primum veniat, haec illi dicite verba:
Servitio in nostro magnos plerumque labores
Passus eras ideoque scias, quod gratia nostra  Aeneid 7.421: Turne, tot incassum fusos patiere labores? “Turnus, will you endure all these labours spent in vain?”
12.32–33: me casus, quae, Turne, sequantur / bella, vides, quantos primus patiare labores. “You see what perils, Turnus, what wars pursue me, what heavy burdens you bear above all.”

 

Prae cunctis temet nimium dilexit amicis.  Aeneid 9.430: tantum infelicem nimium dilexit amicum. “He but loved his hapless friend too well.”

 

Quod volo plus factis te quam cognoscere dictis: 135
Elige de satrapis nuptam tibi Pannoniarum  De satrapis = de filiabus satraparum. Here the Huns’ ruling class generally, rather than any particular officials. Cf. note on line 43.

 

 Judg. 3.3 Vulg.: quinque satrapas Philisthinorum… “Five governors of the Philistines…”

 

Et non pauperiem propriam perpendere cures.
Amplificabo quidem valde te rure domique,  Rure domique: apparently an ablative of means followed by a locative. Taken as a hendiadys, one word should be assimilated to the other in translation (something like “with country estates” or “with land for their household”).

 

 Gen. 17.20 Vulg.: et augebo et multiplicabo eum valde. “I will increase him, and multiply him exceedingly.”

 

Nec quisquam, qui dat sponsam, post facta pudebit.  Pudebit: a personal construction of pudeo, unusual in Classical Latin, though cf. Plautus, Casina 5.2.3.

 

Quod si completis, illum stabilire potestis.' 140  Stabilire: the verb is used with human direct objects in the Vulgate in the sense of “to sustain,” but here it probably has its more literal meaning, continuing the metaphor of the columna from line 126, as Wieland suggests.

 

 Ezek. 4.6 Vulg.: et cum conpleveris haec… “And when thou hast accomplished this…”

 

Complacuit sermo regi coepitque parari.  Ps. 18.15 Vulg.: et erunt ut conplaceant eloquia oris mei. “And the words of my mouth shall be such as may please.”

 

« previous  


next » English Scansion